I liked your work especially the person you picked. Gladstone and Disraeli lived during the same events such as the industrial revolution and Disraeli was succeeded by Gladstone as well. Keep Up the good work!
You could try not to include too many facts, other than that it’s amazing.
Well done Djema great fact file.You presented the information very nicely.
To improve I would recommend that you grab the readers attention more with a little bit more colour and add a link.
i liked the way you used technical language for this text. Next time just make it less posh language so other people can understand other than that its great!
Hello Djema, I liked how you used interesting facts!
However, to improve you should use a hyperlink next time and keep to one font size for the main writing.
I liked your work especially the person you picked. Gladstone and Disraeli lived during the same events such as the industrial revolution and Disraeli was succeeded by Gladstone as well. Keep Up the good work!
You could try not to include too many facts, other than that it’s amazing.
Well done Djema great fact file.You presented the information very nicely.
To improve I would recommend that you grab the readers attention more with a little bit more colour and add a link.
I love all the features you have included in your blog but you can improve it by adding a hyper link.
i liked the way you used technical language for this text. Next time just make it less posh language so other people can understand other than that its great!
Hello Djema, I liked how you used interesting facts!
However, to improve you should use a hyperlink next time and keep to one font size for the main writing.